Friday, March 19, 2010

The Worst Storm Ever By Brian

The Worst Storm Ever
It was a clear night. I could smell the fire burning and the hangi cooking it smelt soooooooo good.

Then... it all started

Flash, rumble, rumble, flash again “oh no”, I cried “a thunderstorm”.
I ran to unplug my radio BUT, to late lightning had stuck it. I was so horrified. But mum said it would still work so I did not worry and it turned out fine.
I just continued watching the storm and it was so fun.
What I saw was amazing it was this I saw the god of thunders fork piercing the heavens and I thought it would hit me. “Arrrrrrrrhhhhhhh” I yelled I heard A hungry lion roaring and I hid.

Then it all calmed down and it was sunny “wow” I thought that is finally over”


Then we had dinner and it was a hangi and it was delish. We went to bed and it was sooooo sticky and hot.
I thought the day was fun because it scared my sisters. Scary because it had sudden noises.

By Brian
Room 3 Broadlands School, Reporoa, New Zealand

31 comments:

  1. We have been studying severe weather in our science classes. Storms can be interesting to observe when you know you are safe! You describe it very well, I could almost see it!

    We wanted to know, what is "hangi?"

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  2. that was amazing

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  3. That is sad that the storm runed the day

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  4. Wow. That sounds really scary. One time, there was a bad storm like that where I live, and lightning almost struck my house. It even crashed my family's computer. But we were ok, and I'm glad you are. Great story.

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  5. I think that was good I could almost smell it & see it. The cooking I could see.

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  6. Wow. That sounds really scary. I was in a storm kind of like that. Lightning almost struck my house, and even crashed my family's computer. But we were ok, and I'm glad you are. Great story.

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  7. I am sorry for your radio and hangi sounds pretty good,oh yea by the way a good story.

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  8. lols...
    your sister got scared?
    oh well...
    the main thing is that you're okay...

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  9. I was once in a storm like that it was very interesting to see I also like watching tornadoes form in the storm I was in my T.V. went out and my radio! Good story

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  10. Whats a hangi??? I haven't tried it before but i would love to...........Yea it is pretty fun watching a storm but it can be scary at the same time

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  11. That was a scary story. I like that you had so many details that I could picture it in my head. It has reminded me of storms around my area and how scared I was.

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  12. It is true that thunder can sound like a lion. So we learned about storms and weather awhile ago.

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  13. I have learned a lot about storms and they can be cool and very bad

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  14. That sound scary scary scary very scary scary scary

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  15. That sounds scary. And what is hangi?

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  16. I like the story but i did not know what hangi means so it was a little challenging to read.

    It was a interesting story to read!

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  17. OK first it was sunny then it was bad then it was sunny again. Ha ha but a good story.

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  18. I thought that your story was very creative

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  19. That was pretty nice i pictured it all in my head.That must have been pretty scary,over here where I live we also get bad thunderstorms.

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  20. I think that was a great story and ive been through some tough wheather also


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  21. Wow the lightning strucked your radio. Storms remind me a lot of tornado but some storms are like a story to many things happen that you think you see.

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  22. we had a tornado in Rocky Comfort and almost hit a school.also we had a storm in Noel it was very very very!!!!! bad ... one of my friends house was almost flooded..

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  23. Storms are soooo scary!!! once we had a very bad storm in Noel because most stores were flooded and my house too.

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  24. Storms are very scary when there very close by your house! I get scared when I see lighting and then hear the thunder.

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  25. I think its an exciting story that you have created. But i to think its funny because my sister gets scared a lot of thunderstorms too,:D

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  26. You have a pretty good story I liked all the details that you used!!!!!!!!!

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  27. That was a very good story. I like it.

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